posted by Gurinderjit Singh (Guri@Khalsa.com) @ January 28, 2009
6 Comments:
Anonymous said...
Marvelous! Teri Kalm nu Lal Salam!
Why blog is not allowing to enter comment for each blog entry? Did change enforced from blog system or you changed the setting in your blog.
Guri Likh Likh ke Apna Andir Thanda Karda hai Koi Ki Sunavay Mar Gaye Geeta di Gatha Svai Mann, Nia (justice) Saaf-Suthri Hava-Pani te Roti-Rozi di Khatar Ess Captialist society ne Insaan nu vi machine Bnata (being treated as commodity).
You have completed the remaining of Gulam ho Gyee Azaadi.. The elements you have described are the essentials rights of a citizen of an independent nation. Not only to blame the politicians, we ourself are slaves of our own behaviors.
I have corrected the configuration mistake which removed the Comments icon from underneath the posts.
A very thought provoking poem! All the things you mentioned are very true. But then the real Punjab lives consists of its people. Modern man has definitely been too much involved making money all the time. At the same time it is we, who can bring about the desired change. And remember every drop counts. Asin eh keh ke kam nahin chala sakde ke mere kehn ja karan naal ki hona hai!
My blog is dedicated to my inner struggles within my conscious. The complexities of life get simplified when translated into poetic expressions.
Email me at: Guri@Khalsa.Com
6 Comments:
Marvelous!
Teri Kalm nu Lal Salam!
Why blog is not allowing to enter comment for each blog entry? Did change enforced from blog system or you changed the setting in your blog.
Guri Likh Likh ke Apna Andir Thanda Karda hai
Koi Ki Sunavay
Mar Gaye Geeta di Gatha
Svai Mann, Nia (justice)
Saaf-Suthri Hava-Pani
te Roti-Rozi di Khatar
Ess Captialist society ne
Insaan nu vi machine Bnata
(being treated as commodity).
-ਸੁਰਜੀਤ ਗਿੱਲ
ਡਿੱਟਰੌਇਟ, ਅਮਰੀਕਾ
Dear Surjit,
You have completed the remaining of Gulam ho Gyee Azaadi..
The elements you have described are the essentials rights of a citizen of an independent nation. Not only to blame the politicians, we ourself are slaves of our own behaviors.
I have corrected the configuration mistake which removed the Comments icon from underneath the posts.
Thanks,
Guri
Very well said.
Well, about the comment link, I thought u had had enough of comments, so you were now done with that part and hence had removed the very link.
Glad to see it back for the lesser mortals.
Brilliant poem, but then all your poems are brilliant and heart-nu-touching.
Manpreet-
It was a human error.. Reader Comments are always enlightening and supporting. Validation is the key to any composition.
Thanks for liking the poem.
Cheers!
A very thought provoking poem! All the things you mentioned are very true. But then the real Punjab lives consists of its people. Modern man has definitely been too much involved making money all the time. At the same time it is we, who can bring about the desired change. And remember every drop counts.
Asin eh keh ke kam nahin chala sakde ke mere kehn ja karan naal ki hona hai!
Absolutely true, Amritbir.
We can't expect the world to change unless we take the onus.
Thanks for your nice thoughts.
- Guri
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