4 Comments:

Manpreet said...

You had sent Challi to me earlier but as you say in your First poem- it was subordinate to the font, that never worked on my computer.
It is so beautiful, read it only today.
The first one is a masterpiece. Beautiful,
post more please.
Thanks for sharing

Manpreet said...

Well, When I had left the previous comment on 15th May, The first poem was "Meri Kavita" but today it is "Mere Ghar da Rah".
It is beautiful as ever.

My compliments !!

Manpreet said...

Oho, Date keon ni change kardey,,,
post a new poem on a changed date for gods sake...

Manpreet said...

By God comments wala khana ta ohi reha.
nawi post tey ja ke nawi poem paya karo na, manually dates na paya karo,
and this vidya poem is wonderful. and so true, sadey sab tey lagoo hundi ae... more on you diasporic people.